[FICTION] Transformers Mosaic: A Voice In The Dark

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Transformers Mosaic: A Voice In The Dark

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Here is the Mosaic piece that Jake Isenberg ( http://inker-guy.deviantart.com/ ) and I worked on. Jake's let me post it up. He did the lines, I did the writing and colouring. It is probably the... third full strip I've coloured and I do think my technique has come a long way, but any tips would be appreciated!

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Feedback has been good so far, which has me stoked!

Deviantart: http://transformers-mosaic.deviantart.c ... -127233443

IDW: http://forum.idwpublishing.com/viewtopi ... 64a0b62aa7

Let us know what you think!

Lines have been put up now, they're here: http://inker-guy.deviantart.com/art/A-V ... -127239501
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Post by Clogs »

Since my home pc is shot - at least for the weekend - forgive me for replying here rather than on the main feedback threads...

I did like that. One I shall keep on my files, once I manage to sort them out. Nice twist in the tail :D
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Post by Blackjack »

The ending was totally unexpected. I thought the Decepticon would be given a chance to join the Autobots or be gunned down. Say, that's Submarauder, isn't it? I like Submarauder.
Beautiful work.
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Post by Pun-3X »

I liked it--mostly because a LOT got told on just a single page. And it didn't feel crammed or rushed. Oh, and the artwork is first-class stuff.

One of the best mosaics I've seen so far. :)
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Post by Blackjack »

Yeah. Another nice twist is that Sky High is someone who likes to 'imagine stuff when he's bored', so the readers will wonder if it's a figment of Sky High's imagination, or a real ghost.

A beautiful story.
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Wow, that was good!:up:
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Post by inflatable dalek »

Very nice, I guessed the ending, but that was down to me having watched more Twilight Zone episodes than is good for me than any faults in the strip, great stuff.
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