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What it says. There probably is some stuff to be after the changeover.
Would be preferable of course, but not all read reviews when those are being fine tuned. IMO it's better to correct clear errors than just leave those be.Originally posted by Clay
That kind of correction actually irritates me a little. Problems with the coding/broken links/etc. are fine, but content critiques should really be done before stuff is uploaded when the author can still freely edit it. :\
"I disagree with your opinion of toy" errors are completely different thing though.
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Was just perusing the very good city commander review, and I thought it might be worth noting that 'without further adieu' means 'without further farewell'. Perhaps the desired phrasing was 'without further ado'...
Apologies for being fastidious
P.S... there are a couple of grammar points too: 'tabs can be flip up' and 'they scrap along the forearm'.
Apologies for being fastidious
P.S... there are a couple of grammar points too: 'tabs can be flip up' and 'they scrap along the forearm'.
Heavy Load Review?
Hey! What happened to my Heavy Load review? I saw it went on the upload thread, then it never appeared. What up wit dat?
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Is this thread ok for accepting grammar requests/corrections then? Because I've got shedloads in my old reviews, and frankly when it comes to the Police checking up what I've been doing on-line over the years, I'd at least like them to think that my writing skills were up to snuff...
Downright embarrassing, some of 'em. Film at eleven!
Downright embarrassing, some of 'em. Film at eleven!
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I was just reading Prowl 1984's Review on Generations Blurr, and noticed one issue with it that needs correction. In the review, he says that you can't put Blurr into a proper sniper pose with him looking through the scope. This is not accurate, as I have actually done so. Here is he image:
Also, I was looking at the Perceptor review by Paul 053, and took particular notice of the "microscope" mode the reviewer gave him, and have (IMO) a much better version of said mode:
Also, I was looking at the Perceptor review by Paul 053, and took particular notice of the "microscope" mode the reviewer gave him, and have (IMO) a much better version of said mode:
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